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Wednesday 27 May 2020

A never ending tunnel

Kia Ora Bloggers, this blog will be about my writing task for this week. The task was to create a minimum 9 sentence story using a image from Pobble or Once upon a Picture. I used a picture from Pobble called " A never ending tunnel".  Here is the starting sentences from my story.

The  tunnel is a blur at the end. As the green walls stretch into one I see something move. It is the sticks moving in the wind like hands trying to grab something. As you walk closer you see something walking towards you. It stops and stares at you. It’s deep black eyes looking as if to control your brain. As you turn to run it is there in front of you. It says in a deep voice “ Get Out”. 


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  1. Anonymous29 May 2020 at 12:27

    Hi Kade. Awesome story,you have put alot of detail in your story
    good job!

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